Who Was Paul Revere is a book that thought me all about Paul Revere and gave me the chance to open up to more history. Paul saved many lives. Paul saved the chance for Americans' freedom. When the British were unfair and charred taxes for tea they didn’t want. Rever had to be brave. He joined a secret group that figured out what the British were planning. He mostly did his work at night. He warned the city of Boston all the way to New Jersey. His dreams were to be famous for saving America.
I thought the book was the perfect chance to practice blogging nonfiction history. It painted a picture in my mind. The pictures were right on key. I wonder why paul wanted to risk his life. However, he saved the freedom of America as I said. Paul Revere will go down in history. Clearly, I loved this book. It was the perfect book for me and I hope it is for you too.
~Gavin Patterson
Pretty good job on the second paragraph Gavin. However, you need to start your paragraph with an IVF sentence. Also, be sure to check for convention errors before you submit it.
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